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生:老师一再强调写作文要写好细节。师:是啊。写细节很重要——比如,朱自清先生通过父亲过月台买橘子的细节感动了数以亿计的读者:我看见他戴着黑布小帽,穿着黑布大马褂,深青布棉袍,蹒跚地走到铁道边,慢慢探身下去,尚不大难。可是他穿过铁道,要爬上那边月台,就不容易了。他用两手攀着上面,两脚再向上缩;他肥胖的身子向左微倾,显出努力的样子。这时我看见他的背影,我的泪很快地流下来了。我赶紧拭干了泪。怕他看见,也怕别人看见。
Students: The teacher has repeatedly stressed that writing should be written in detail. Teacher: Yeah. It is important to write the details - for example, Mr. Zhu Ziqing touched hundreds of millions of readers through the details of his father’s purchase of oranges on the platform: I saw him wearing a black cloth cap, a black cloth tunic, Walking to the edge of the railway, slowly go on, not a big deal. But he crossed the railway, to climb the platform over there, it is not easy. He climbed above with both hands and his feet up again; his obese body leaning to the left, showing the way it worked. Then I saw his back, my tears flowed quickly. I quickly wiped away tears. Fear he saw, but also afraid of others see.