完美的交响乐,如同细细编织的锦缎,离不开互动与配合,倾听与挥洒。学生写作与名师点评的穿插是创造和鉴赏的结合,最和谐的交响乐由此缓缓流淌而出。个体行走在群体中,他人的眼光紧盯着你,让人不敢多行一步路、多说一句话,轻则被耻笑了去,重则为千夫所指。毕竟人有丑恶的一面,不加以约束,人世便难得和谐,必不可少的是道德成规。然 Perfect symphony, like a fine braided damask, can not do without interaction and coordination, listening and swaying. The combination of student writing and teacher commentary is a combination of creation and appreciation, whereby the most harmonious symphony is slowly flowing. Individual walking in the group, others look at you, people dare not walk more than one line, say a few words, ranging from being ridiculed to go, while the emphasis is on a thousand means. After all, people have ugly side, without restraint, uncommon harmony will be worldly life, it is essential that moral rules. Of course