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从小学到初中,老师要求学生进行“人物写作”的训练文不计其数,老师在学生写作前的辅导也大致关注“选材”“描写”“突出个性”“详略得当”等几个重点板块,然后作精当点拨。然而作文簿中优秀的描写人物题材的文章依然凤毛麟角,那么,学生的写人物题材文章中存有哪些共同的诟病呢?笔者经过几次批改观察,发现最主要的问题依然存在于“选材”上。
From primary school to junior high school, the teacher asked the students to carry out countless training courses on “writing of characters.” The teachers also paid close attention to the guidance before the writing of the students. “Selection”, “Description”, “Personality Highlighting” Detailed and appropriate “and several other key sections, and then make the appropriate call. However, excellent writing articles written in the subject matter of the story is still rare, then, the students write the subject matter of the article there are what common criticism? The author after several observations, found that the most important issue still exists in the ”on.