[原题呈现]一个特点鲜明的人,总是给人留下深刻的印象,即使偶然见上一面,他(她)的举手投足也会留在心中挥之不去。这次习作,我们就来写这样一个人。可以写身边熟悉的人,也可以写偶然见到的陌生人。写的时候,试着运用课文中一些写人的方法,写出他某一方面的特点。(人教五下“习作七”)恶作剧女王是谁?她呀,就是我的堂妹小玥!请欣赏她的恶作剧伎俩吧!一次,我去小玥家,刚进门,她就向我扑来:“表姐,你来啦?欢迎欢迎!”眼睛眯眯着笑得只能看见一条缝,那声音甜得腻死人。“哟,这么热情呀!以后我天天来你也这样热情?”我回答说。“当然,当然!”小玥继续讨好道。 [Original presentation] A distinctive person, always impressed people, even if the chance to see the one hand, his (her) gestures will remain in my heart lingering. This exercise, we come to write such a person. You can write familiar people, you can write strangers to see by chance. At the time of writing, try to write some of his characteristics by using some of the writing methods in the text. (People teach five “practice seven ”) Who is the prank Queen? She is my cousin Little Yue! Please enjoy her prank trick! Once, I went to Xiao Yue home, just door, she would to I flutter: “cousin, are you coming? Welcome!” Smiled and could only see a slit in the eyes, the voice was sweet and tired people. “Yo, so passionate! After I come to you every day so passionate?” I replied. “Of course, of course! ” Xiao Yue continued to please Road.