大多数初高中学生写作议论文时,一般习惯于使用事例论证的方法去说理。然而,他们却不懂得事例论证须既简明又恰当的道理,就是一些发表了的作品也未能避免此病。下面笔者以刊载于某刊的文章《吾爱孤独》为例加以阐述。《吾爱孤独》虽然有两个亮点(文章处处以“我认为怎样”而不是“别人认为怎样”行文;思路清晰,脉络清楚,有纲有目,以纲统目),但是无庸讳言,它也存在两个比较严重的缺陷。 Most high school students writing essay, the general accustomed to the use of case law to justify the argument. However, they do not understand the simple and appropriate reasoning of cases. Some published works have failed to avoid the disease. The following author published in a magazine article “I love loneliness” as an example to elaborate. There are two bright spots in my love of loneliness (the article everywhere “” I think of “rather than ” others think how "text; clear thinking, clear context, Needless to say, it also has two more serious flaws.