陈佳迅的校园故事读了不少,北京小作家协会安排我来辅导她的写作,因此陆续读到了她写的作文。佳迅很认真,每次都会及时地提交作业。有的是读后感,有的是抒情文,还有的是班级故事。我觉得她写班级故事写得特别好,就在点评和回信里建议她多写班级故事,多尝试写校园小说。佳迅听从了我的建议,写了不少班级故事,而且这些班级故事有些已经很有小说的艺术性。比如,这一篇《寒假?寒假!》,故事性很强,班上男生和女生 Chen Jiaxun read a lot of school stories, Beijing Little Writers Association arranged for me to guide her writing, so she read the composition she wrote. Jia Xun very serious, every time in time to submit homework. Some are sense of reading, some are lyric, there is a class story. I think she wrote particularly well written class stories, comments and replies in the comments she suggested writing more class stories, more attempts to write school fiction. Jia Xun listened to my suggestion, wrote a lot of class stories, and some of these class stories have very novel artistry. For example, this one “winter vacation? Winter vacation!”, Story strong, boys and girls in the class