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撰写此文,源于学生们对作文的困惑。关于亲情幸福的话题,同学们从小学写作文起就经常接触,慢慢地这样的话题写起来就味同嚼蜡了:冬夜,背生病的我去医院;雨天,给没带雨具的我送伞;深夜,给伏案学习的我端上一杯热牛奶……几十篇的作文读下来,内容大同小异,很少写出新意。学生抱怨说不知从何写起,甚至说平淡的生活中,根本感受不到幸福和爱。而这往往是因为缺少对生活细节的观察与描写。幸福是什么?毕淑敏曾说:“幸福就是
Writing this article, from the students confused composition. On the topic of happy family, students from the primary school writing since the beginning of regular contact, slowly write such a topic to taste the same: Winter night, back sick I went to the hospital; rainy days, I umbrella without rain gear; Late at night, I was asked to study a desk cup of hot milk ... ... dozens of articles read down, the content is more or less the same, rarely write new ideas. Students complain that I do not know where to start, or even plain life, simply can not feel the happiness and love. This is often due to the lack of observation and description of the details of life. What is happiness? Bi Shumin once said: ”happiness is