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在上一回的写作指导中,我们提到景物的融入会让文章的语言亮起来。其实,景物描写在文中的作用远不止于此,恰当而精妙的景物描写会营造出文章含蓄优美的意境,让读者很容易走进文章的情境中,并被深深打动,景物描写在记叙文写作中具有神奇的功效。下面让我们来比较一下。同学们一定记得这段文字:那天,是他们离家以来所遇到的一个最恶劣的天气。一早上,天就阴沉下来。天黑,河水也黑,芦苇成了一片黑海。杜小康甚至觉得风也是黑的。临近中午时,雷声已如万辆战车从天边滚动过来,过不一会,暴风雨就歇斯底里地开始了,顿时,天昏地暗,仿佛世纪已到了末日。四下里,一片呼呼
In the last writing guide, we mentioned that the integration of the scenery would make the language of the article light up. In fact, the description of the scene in the text is much more than this, the appropriate and subtle description of the scene will create a subtle and elegant mood of the article, so that readers can easily enter the context of the article, and was deeply moved, scene description in the narrative writing In the magical effect. Let’s compare it Students must remember this passage: That day was one of the worst weather they encountered since leaving home. In the morning, the sky is gloomy. Dark, the river is black, the reeds have become a Black Sea. Du Xiaokang even think the wind is black. As noon approached, the thunder had rolled like a million chariots from the horizon. After a short while, the storm began hysterically, and suddenly it was dark and faint, as if the century had come to an end. All around, a whirring