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故事要想讲得生动,必须有个性鲜明的人物。让我们笔下的人物做出连续性的动作,通过这些连续性动作,完成一个行为的过程,或者体现人物的某种状态,会让我们的故事紧凑有趣,更有吸引力。怎样写好连续性动作呢?一、扣住一个人在一段时间内的几个动作来描绘我们先来读一下这段文字:放学了,她骑着自行车回家,一路上瞧见建筑工人在造房子,听到树上的蝉儿在不停地鸣叫。到了家,从自行车上面下来,放好自行
If you want to tell a vivid story, you must have a distinct personality. Let the characters in our works make continuous actions. Through these continuous actions, the process of completing a course of action or the state of a person can make our story more interesting and attractive. How to write a continuous action? First, withhold a few movements in a period of time to describe us to read this passage: After school, she rode a bike home, along the way to see the construction workers in the making House, heard the tree cicadas kept ringing. At home, get off your bike and let it go