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一直以来,学生作文最需要解决的问题是什么?我觉得首选取材。因为大多数学生的作文取材呈现出两个特点,一是陈俗,二是情节胡编乱造。究其原因,不外乎是学生眼不见物、心不装事、脑不思悟,没这意识和习惯;再深究,那就是老师对学生的观察和思考疏于引导,学生不知如何积累写作素材。如何引导?不必舍近求远,课本上就有太多的名家实例。例如:我们可以借助《行道树》《紫藤萝瀑布》等文章引导学生学会观察自然,学会写景状物;通过《背影》《老王》等文章,学着看人审事,关注生活、关注社会;引导学生做生活的有心人,随时随地广泛积累素材,走出作文取材陈俗和失真的囹圄。
All along, the students most need to address the composition of what is the problem? I think the first choice. Because most students come up with two characteristics of the composition, one is the vulgar, the second is the plot made up. The reason, nothing more than students out of sight, not mind things, the brain does not ponder, no such awareness and habits; and then look, it is the teacher’s negligence in the observation and thinking of students, students do not know how to accumulate writing material. How to guide? Not far away, there are too many famous examples of textbooks. For example, we can guide students to learn to observe nature and learn to write scenery by means of articles such as “Street Tree” and “Wisteria Falls.” Through reading articles such as “Back View” and “Pharaoh”, we learn to look after people, Guide students to do their utmost to make a living, accumulate material anytime, anywhere, get rid of the essay to take the clichés and distortions.