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在高考英语书面表达中,一篇优秀作文,除了要点齐全、语言规范准确、内容连贯、行文流畅以外,还必须在运用较为复杂结构和较高级词汇上有所表现。所以,在整篇文章中,有意识地灵活运用复杂句式和高级词汇,不仅显示出自己扎实的英语功底,而且为文章增添亮点,给人一种含金量高的审美享受,也就等于给了阅卷老师一个打高分的理由。
一、 在掌握运用英语基本写作句型基础上,学会使用一些高级句子的表达。句式多变、复杂得体,避免句式单一、缺乏生气,使得文章有声有色,让人耳目一新,成为得高分的亮点。
方法一:注重文章的开始句 / 主题句、承转句和结尾句,它会吸引阅卷老师的眼球。
1. Early in the morning we students met at the school gate.
把状语置于句首,改变那种单一的开头方式(即;主语—谓语—宾语—状语)。
2. With the rapid development / advance of science and technology, a lot of social problems have come into being.
3. As we all know / As is well known / As far as I’m concerned, the following ways are of great help to us.
4. As an old saying goes / runs, “ Honesty is the best policy.”
5. It is said / thought / known / reported / expected / believed / …that reading increases our knowledge and broadens our mind.
以上句子可用于文章的开始或主题句,使表达简练生动,主题突出。
6. We need to live a regular life. That is to say / That is / Namely,we can keep good hours and refrain from smoking and drinking too much.
7. As a matter of fact / In fact, it is health that counts.
8. Besides / In addition, we should not forget that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.
9. The government should enforce laws strictly. On the other hand, the public also should develop a good habit of reducing pollution.
10. In view of the practical need of society, there are more and more people interested in learning English.
以上句子可用于文章承转句。注重语段衔接也是取得高分的杀手锏。
11. Last but not least, there is the question of adequate funding.
12. For these reasons, I think that receiving college education is wise.
13. Wish you success.
用于文章结论句。这种句式更能鲜明地表达出说话者的态度和观点,给人留下一个圆满的结局。
方法二:在整篇文章中,要特别注重使用一些较为复杂的结构,如非谓语动词、独立主格结构、倒装句、强调句、虚拟句、定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句等。
14. I was surprised to find my hometown changed so much.
15. He is a man loved and respected by all.
16. We could do nothing but / other than wait.
17. To be honest, I know nothing about it.
18. Given a chance, I can surprise the world.
19. Television has so many advantages. It keeps us informed about the latest news, and also provides entertainment in the home.
20. It is necessary for me to make a plan for my studies before a new term.
21. The Olympic mascots are the Olympic flam, the fish, the pander, the Tibetan antelope and the swallow, representing a close group of friends.
22. With the magazine An Express Way to English to help us, we will improve our language skills a lot.
23. The bird flu sweeping through Asia has jumped from birds to humans at least 20 times so far, killing 16.
以上非谓语动词的使用使句子显得更简洁,更高级,必定会获得阅卷老师较好的印象。
24. Only by changing the way we live can we save the earth.
25. Only when we realize the importance of environmental protection can we care more about nature and build a harmonious relationship with our earth.
26. Gone are the days when farmers live in the poor houses.
27. Not only should we students study hard, we also should know how to enjoy ourselves in our spare time.
28. Away went my parents.
倒装句有意“打破常规”,使句子带有强烈的情感色彩,使行文错落有致,往往会使要传递的信息在读者心中产生共鸣,会收到良好效果。
29. It was because the traffic was very heavy during the rush hour that I was late again.
30. I don’t know when it is that he will come back.
31. It wasn’t until his father came back from work that he did his homework.
强调句式的使用使得写作重点突出,给读者留下了深刻的印象,同时使文章结构更加紧凑、行文节奏婉转流畅。
32. Our headteacher treats us as if we were her own children, so all the students in our class think highly of her.
33. It’s high time (that) we did something to improve our environment.
34. I failed in the maths exam. How I wish I hadn’t wasted so much time playing.
35. If I were a bird, I could fly in the sky.
要是我是一只小鸟的话,我就可以在天空飞翔。这简直就是诗一样的语言,使这种表达极其不普通,这就是运用虚拟语气的效果;化腐朽为神奇,改平淡为传神。
36. What’s exciting and interesting is that we can exchange language lessons, with you teaching me English, and me teaching you Chinese!
37. The suggestion that students should learn something practical is worth considering.
38. One advantage of playing the guitar is that it can give you a great deal of pleasure.
39. To own a colour TV set in each family, which we thought was impossible twenty years ago, now has become true.
这样的句子让人感到“头重脚轻”或“头轻脚重’,它会显得与众不同,使句式表达更具有多样性,使行文具有跌宕起伏之效果。
40. We are living in an age when many things are done on computer.
41. Besides local students, who make up 91 percent, eight percent of the students are the children of non-local workers.
42. Signs for environmental protection and sorting waste in our daily life are the reminders that we should do our best to make our homeland cleaner and better.
43. As long as you don’t lose heart, you will succeed.
文章中加进这样的句子,使文章更紧凑、严密,语意表述准确而充实,信息含量大。
二、在用词准确、得体的基础上,选择较为高级的词汇,或一些熟悉词汇的较高级用法,正如一叶知秋,体现了作者驾驭语言的能力,想不得高分也难。
方法一:避免重复使用词汇。有时一篇作文里会多次出现某一词时,这时表达方式的变化(用不同的单词或词组表达相同的意义),使词汇运用丰富多彩,章法灵活。
44. The new railway is still under construction. ( is being built )
45. The project is now well under way.
46. After 20 years the town had changed beyond recognition.
47. I’m awfully grateful to you for taking so much trouble to help me. (Thank you for…)
方法二:注重使用短语、习语来代替某些词,使得文章具有多彩性。
48. Every coin has two sides.
49. 25% of my classmates hold the view that doing part-time jobs will help one gain work experience and learn more of the society. (think)
50. All work and no play make(s) Jack a dull boy.只工作,不玩耍,聪明孩子会变傻。
在写作中使用一些习语、谚语和俗话使文章带有风趣性。
方法三: 使用一些地道的、具有“洋味”的单词。
51. This is a challenging job. (difficult / hard )
52. Your letter of Sep.10 reached / got to me this morning.
53. I believe the future of the education in our country is promising.
方法四:灵活运用一些熟悉词汇的较高级用法。
54. Her heart melted with pity. 她因怜悯而心软了。
55. Tears welled up in her eyes. 她泪盈于睫。
56. Poverty is a stranger to industry. 勤劳的人不会穷。
57. The dishes are really inviting. 饭菜的确诱人。
再如: address(向…发表演说;直接向…说话);back(支持) foreign(不熟悉的;和…格格不入);fine(罚款);jump(大幅度上涨);promise(有希望;可能会有);spell(意味着、导致…(结果);spring(猛然跳起;涌出);succeed(继承;继任);conclude(终止)等。像access, available,annoyed, upset, confused, essential, exceptional, fascinated, participate, quit, stuff, schedule, terrific等都是一些较高级词汇。
新的考试大纲对影响书面表达评分的因素作了明确要求,其中,“语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但是为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致,给分档次仍在最高档(25-29)。当然,高考书面表达取得高分也不是a piece of cake,但是,“不经一番寒霜苦,哪得梅花扑鼻香。”
一、 在掌握运用英语基本写作句型基础上,学会使用一些高级句子的表达。句式多变、复杂得体,避免句式单一、缺乏生气,使得文章有声有色,让人耳目一新,成为得高分的亮点。
方法一:注重文章的开始句 / 主题句、承转句和结尾句,它会吸引阅卷老师的眼球。
1. Early in the morning we students met at the school gate.
把状语置于句首,改变那种单一的开头方式(即;主语—谓语—宾语—状语)。
2. With the rapid development / advance of science and technology, a lot of social problems have come into being.
3. As we all know / As is well known / As far as I’m concerned, the following ways are of great help to us.
4. As an old saying goes / runs, “ Honesty is the best policy.”
5. It is said / thought / known / reported / expected / believed / …that reading increases our knowledge and broadens our mind.
以上句子可用于文章的开始或主题句,使表达简练生动,主题突出。
6. We need to live a regular life. That is to say / That is / Namely,we can keep good hours and refrain from smoking and drinking too much.
7. As a matter of fact / In fact, it is health that counts.
8. Besides / In addition, we should not forget that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.
9. The government should enforce laws strictly. On the other hand, the public also should develop a good habit of reducing pollution.
10. In view of the practical need of society, there are more and more people interested in learning English.
以上句子可用于文章承转句。注重语段衔接也是取得高分的杀手锏。
11. Last but not least, there is the question of adequate funding.
12. For these reasons, I think that receiving college education is wise.
13. Wish you success.
用于文章结论句。这种句式更能鲜明地表达出说话者的态度和观点,给人留下一个圆满的结局。
方法二:在整篇文章中,要特别注重使用一些较为复杂的结构,如非谓语动词、独立主格结构、倒装句、强调句、虚拟句、定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句等。
14. I was surprised to find my hometown changed so much.
15. He is a man loved and respected by all.
16. We could do nothing but / other than wait.
17. To be honest, I know nothing about it.
18. Given a chance, I can surprise the world.
19. Television has so many advantages. It keeps us informed about the latest news, and also provides entertainment in the home.
20. It is necessary for me to make a plan for my studies before a new term.
21. The Olympic mascots are the Olympic flam, the fish, the pander, the Tibetan antelope and the swallow, representing a close group of friends.
22. With the magazine An Express Way to English to help us, we will improve our language skills a lot.
23. The bird flu sweeping through Asia has jumped from birds to humans at least 20 times so far, killing 16.
以上非谓语动词的使用使句子显得更简洁,更高级,必定会获得阅卷老师较好的印象。
24. Only by changing the way we live can we save the earth.
25. Only when we realize the importance of environmental protection can we care more about nature and build a harmonious relationship with our earth.
26. Gone are the days when farmers live in the poor houses.
27. Not only should we students study hard, we also should know how to enjoy ourselves in our spare time.
28. Away went my parents.
倒装句有意“打破常规”,使句子带有强烈的情感色彩,使行文错落有致,往往会使要传递的信息在读者心中产生共鸣,会收到良好效果。
29. It was because the traffic was very heavy during the rush hour that I was late again.
30. I don’t know when it is that he will come back.
31. It wasn’t until his father came back from work that he did his homework.
强调句式的使用使得写作重点突出,给读者留下了深刻的印象,同时使文章结构更加紧凑、行文节奏婉转流畅。
32. Our headteacher treats us as if we were her own children, so all the students in our class think highly of her.
33. It’s high time (that) we did something to improve our environment.
34. I failed in the maths exam. How I wish I hadn’t wasted so much time playing.
35. If I were a bird, I could fly in the sky.
要是我是一只小鸟的话,我就可以在天空飞翔。这简直就是诗一样的语言,使这种表达极其不普通,这就是运用虚拟语气的效果;化腐朽为神奇,改平淡为传神。
36. What’s exciting and interesting is that we can exchange language lessons, with you teaching me English, and me teaching you Chinese!
37. The suggestion that students should learn something practical is worth considering.
38. One advantage of playing the guitar is that it can give you a great deal of pleasure.
39. To own a colour TV set in each family, which we thought was impossible twenty years ago, now has become true.
这样的句子让人感到“头重脚轻”或“头轻脚重’,它会显得与众不同,使句式表达更具有多样性,使行文具有跌宕起伏之效果。
40. We are living in an age when many things are done on computer.
41. Besides local students, who make up 91 percent, eight percent of the students are the children of non-local workers.
42. Signs for environmental protection and sorting waste in our daily life are the reminders that we should do our best to make our homeland cleaner and better.
43. As long as you don’t lose heart, you will succeed.
文章中加进这样的句子,使文章更紧凑、严密,语意表述准确而充实,信息含量大。
二、在用词准确、得体的基础上,选择较为高级的词汇,或一些熟悉词汇的较高级用法,正如一叶知秋,体现了作者驾驭语言的能力,想不得高分也难。
方法一:避免重复使用词汇。有时一篇作文里会多次出现某一词时,这时表达方式的变化(用不同的单词或词组表达相同的意义),使词汇运用丰富多彩,章法灵活。
44. The new railway is still under construction. ( is being built )
45. The project is now well under way.
46. After 20 years the town had changed beyond recognition.
47. I’m awfully grateful to you for taking so much trouble to help me. (Thank you for…)
方法二:注重使用短语、习语来代替某些词,使得文章具有多彩性。
48. Every coin has two sides.
49. 25% of my classmates hold the view that doing part-time jobs will help one gain work experience and learn more of the society. (think)
50. All work and no play make(s) Jack a dull boy.只工作,不玩耍,聪明孩子会变傻。
在写作中使用一些习语、谚语和俗话使文章带有风趣性。
方法三: 使用一些地道的、具有“洋味”的单词。
51. This is a challenging job. (difficult / hard )
52. Your letter of Sep.10 reached / got to me this morning.
53. I believe the future of the education in our country is promising.
方法四:灵活运用一些熟悉词汇的较高级用法。
54. Her heart melted with pity. 她因怜悯而心软了。
55. Tears welled up in her eyes. 她泪盈于睫。
56. Poverty is a stranger to industry. 勤劳的人不会穷。
57. The dishes are really inviting. 饭菜的确诱人。
再如: address(向…发表演说;直接向…说话);back(支持) foreign(不熟悉的;和…格格不入);fine(罚款);jump(大幅度上涨);promise(有希望;可能会有);spell(意味着、导致…(结果);spring(猛然跳起;涌出);succeed(继承;继任);conclude(终止)等。像access, available,annoyed, upset, confused, essential, exceptional, fascinated, participate, quit, stuff, schedule, terrific等都是一些较高级词汇。
新的考试大纲对影响书面表达评分的因素作了明确要求,其中,“语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但是为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致,给分档次仍在最高档(25-29)。当然,高考书面表达取得高分也不是a piece of cake,但是,“不经一番寒霜苦,哪得梅花扑鼻香。”