“我的脸颊顿时滚烫滚烫的,我惭愧地低下头,恨不能找个地缝钻进去。”好多小朋友都这样写难受的心情,因此写法一般化。如果能巧妙地运用比喻来描写心理,那么会更贴切,更有感染力。例如:“我的眼睛定格在试卷左上角那刺眼的‘58’分上,肚子里像吞下了一包钢 ”My cheeks suddenly hot hot, I am ashamed to bow his head, can not wait to find a seam to drill in. “ Many children are so uncomfortable mood to write, so the general way of writing. If you can skillfully use metaphor to describe the psychological, then it will be more appropriate, more contagious. For example: ”My eyes freeze in the upper left corner of the test paper that dazzling“ 58 ”points, the stomach swallowed a pack of steel