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指导教师吴印涛作文名师。2010年暑期创办“吴老师作文工作室”和二月花文学社。个人有多篇教育教学论文和随笔发表在报纸、杂志上。辅导学生发表习作2000余篇,在全国作文比赛中获奖3000多次。曾担任多家报社、杂志社的特约编辑。1开头扣题,可以避免出现跑题现象,很好!2这一句里,先对家人进行角色分工,给大家阅读下文做好了铺垫。但是,在“而我是一位永久在医院的病人”中,小作者少了一个“住”字。
Instructors Wu Yin Tao composition teacher. 2010 Summer founded “Miss Wu composition studio ” and February Flower Society. Personal education teaching papers and essays published in newspapers, magazines. Counseling students published more than 2,000 exercises, winning more than 3,000 awards in the national essay competition. Has served as a number of newspapers, magazines, contributing editor. 1 at the beginning buckle, you can avoid the phenomenon of running the problem, very good! 2 This sentence, the first division of roles of the family, to prepare for everyone to read the following pave the way. However, in “And I am a patient permanently in the hospital ”, the author has a less “live” word.