苏教版必修一“月是故乡明”单元选了老舍《想北平》、韩少功《我心归去》、曹文轩《前方》和刘亮程《今生今世的证据》四篇散文。教完这个单元后,我布置学生以“故乡”为题写一篇文章,希望他们能够思考自己和故乡的关系,找到心灵家园和精神寄托。而绝大部分同学这一次的写作仍然停留在模式化记叙文的层面上,小桥流水、青瓦白墙、卖栀子花茉莉花的老奶奶等 The Sujiao Edition compulsory one “month is the hometown ” unit selected Lao She “want to Peiping”, Han Shaogong “my heart go back”, Cao Wenxuan “front” and Liu Liangcheng “present and present evidence” four essays. After teaching this unit, I arranged the students to write an essay entitled “Hometown ”, hoping they could think about their relationship with their hometown and find the spiritual home and spiritual sustenance. The vast majority of students writing this time still remain at the level of pattern narrative, bridges, blue and white white walls, selling gardenia jasmine granny, etc.