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假设性作文是经常见到的一种作文命题形式,如《假如世界上没有绿色》《如果让我选择家庭》《假如我只有三天光明》《如果我是……》《如果真的没有冬天》等。写这类题目需要充分的想像力,又需要现实的生活基础,它可以训练、考查作者的写作能力,特别是想像力和选材能力。因而这类题目同学们经常碰到,在中考作文中也出现得较多。但从写作实践来看,同学们在作文中存在一个较普遍的问题:松散。由于这类题目的限制很少,它的选材范围很广,有的同学逮着什么写什么,东写一点,西写一点,一点一段,最后什么也没写具体,一点也不集中,泛泛而谈让人读后不知所云。请看下面的文章:假如世界上没有绿色地球是人类共同的家园,世界是人类生存的宝地,我们应美化它,保护它,让它充满绿色,充满活泼可爱、蓬勃向上的生机。假如世界上没有了绿色,那么一切都是空谈,世界将会变得很空虚,万物尽失。
Hypothetical writing is a form of composition proposition often seen, such as “If there is no green in the world” “If you let me choose a family” “If I only have three days of light” “If I was ...” “If there is really no winter ”Wait. Writing such topics requires full imagination and a realistic foundation of life. It can train and examine the author’s writing skills, especially imagination and material selection. As a result, students of this type often encounter it, and they appear more often in the essay. However, in terms of writing practice, there is a common problem in the students’ writing: looseness. Since there are few restrictions on such topics, it has a wide range of material selections. Some students take what they write, write in the East, write in the West, do a little bit of it, and finally write nothing concrete, not at all. It is not clear what people talk about after reading the book. Please read the following article: If there is no green earth in the world that is a common home for mankind, and the world is a treasured land for humankind, we should beautify it, protect it, make it full of green, full of lively, lovely and vigorous vitality. If there is no green in the world, everything will be empty talk. The world will become empty and everything will be lost.