岑崎兄: 寄赠的诗集《少女与天使》仔细地读了。我佩服你的探索的勇气。实话告诉你,我从未写过长篇叙事诗,曾经尝试过,怎么也写不好,便停笔了。中国的新诗年龄太小,只有七十多岁,至今还没有摸索出一个统一的体式出来。抒情诗好一些,艾青给我们开辟了一个自由体诗的天地,但用来写叙事诗就行不通,愈写愈散,谁读?换了 Cen AK: Brother sent poems “girls and angels” carefully read. I admire your courage to explore. Tell you the truth, I have never written a long narrative poem, have tried, how to write well, they stop writing. The age of new Chinese poetry is too young, only in its seventies, so far it has not yet been explored in a unified way. Lyrics better, Ai Qing us to open up a world of liberal poetry, but to write narrative poetry does not work, the more you write more, who read? Changed