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习作题目解析小朋友,当你看到这个题目时,是否觉得有些奇怪呢?这个题目是否深深地吸引了你,想赶快阅读,看看究竟发生了什么事情呢?这是一篇记事的文章,写的是曾龙可小朋友在过新年吃汤圆时,通过找包在汤圆里的硬币而获得红包的事情。这样的文章要把事件的时间、地点、人物和事情的起因、经过、结果这“六要素”写清楚。但重点是围绕着“找硬币”的过程来写,我们要抓住“找”这个中心词,对“找”的过程中人物的一系列动作、神态、心理活动加以细致的描写。这样就可以使整件事情详细具体地呈现在读者面前,使读者有身临其境之感。下面.我们首先来看曾龙可小朋友是怎么写的。
Excuse me, do you think this is a strange thing when you see this topic? Whether this topic has attracted you deeply and want to quickly read and see what happened? This is a memo article, Written by Zeng Longke children can eat dumplings in the New Year, by finding the coins wrapped in dumplings and get a red envelope things. Such articles should make clear the time, place, people, and causes of the incident and the result of this “six elements”. But the key point is to write around the process of “finding coins.” We need to grasp the central term of “looking for” and give a detailed explanation of the series of movements, demeanor and psychological activities of the characters in “looking for” The description. In this way, the whole thing can be presented in detail to the readers in detail so that the readers have a sense of immersion. Here we first look at how children can be written Zeng Long.