李白诗云:“清水出芙蓉,天然去雕饰。”意思是说刚出清水的芙蓉花,质朴明媚,毫无雕琢装饰。在现实的作文教学中,老师也常常把文章的自然清新作为作文训练的重要目标之一,希望学生的文章能够让人感觉自然真实,没有任何逻辑上的问题。但实际上,我们常常 Li Bai poetry: “The clear water out of hibiscus, natural to decorate.” Means that the fresh water hibiscus flower, simple and plain, no decoration. In practical composition teaching, teachers often use the natural freshness of the article as one of the important goals of composition training. I hope that students’ articles can make people feel natural and real without any logical problems. But in reality, we often