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作文课上,老师让写一个身边的人。赵梅同学写了自己的妈妈,同桌马良写了一位农民工哥哥。两个人平时写作水平差不多,老师给赵梅的评语是一般般,而对马良同学大加赞扬,夸奖他的文章立意深刻。赵梅不解,经过老师的分析才明白,自己的文章只是就事论事、就人说人,而马良的文章写出了农民工虽然贫穷但不卑微的精神。并且以小见大,关注到了生活在社会底层的一类人,高屋建瓴,立意深刻。对,要写出立意深刻的文章就需要你打破常规思维,做到深入挖
Writing class, the teacher let a person around to write. Zhao Mei students wrote their own mom, at the same table Ma Liang wrote a migrant worker brother. Two people usually writing about the same level, the teacher’s comments to Zhao Mei is generally like, but praised the students Ma Liang, praised his article deliberately profound. Zhao Mei puzzled, after analysis by the teacher to understand that his article is just a matter of discussion, people say people, while the article written by Ma Liang, although poor but not humble spirit. In the meantime, I pay close attention to the people living in the bottom of society. Yes, to write a profound meaning of the article you need to break the conventional thinking, to dig deeper