上周写的《难忘的一件事》我再也批改不下去了,准备打回去重写!哪里是难忘?整个像记流水账。文中的人物简直是木头一堆,没有语言,没有动作,没有表情。尤其是这帮男孩子,更是言简意不赅,还总是毛病百出!这不,虽然我已经来到教室,可还有几个学生匆匆从厕所跑进教室里来。我正不耐烦呢,却听“扑通” Last week wrote “unforgettable thing,” I no longer criticize the amendment, ready to call back to rewrite! Where is the memorable? The characters in the text are simply a pile of wood, no language, no action, no expression. Especially the gang of boys, but also simple words, but also always a problem! This is not, though I have come to the classroom, there are a few students hurried from the toilet ran into the classroom. I am impatient, but listen to “thump”