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下面是中考作文中出现的几个典型失误片段,我们应当怎样修改呢?A.描写人物,你千万别这样写伙伴们天真无邪的微笑,无处不在的大自然气息,陪伴我不知不觉从温暖洋溢的白天不留一丝痕迹地过渡到了安详静谧的夏夜。(2014年辽宁省中考作文《微笑》)温馨提示:题目是《微笑》,文章对伙伴们的微笑却一笔带过,缺乏细节描写。那么,什
Here are a few typical mistakes that appear in your essay composition. How can we change it? A. Describing characters, you should never write innocent smiles of partners, the ubiquitous nature of nature, I do not know Feeling from the warm day without leaving a trace of the transition to a peaceful and quiet summer night. (2014 Liaoning province senior high school entrance examination composition “smile”) Tips: The subject is “smile”, the article smile to partners but a passing, the lack of detail description. So, what