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【真题回放】阅读下面的材料,按照要求作文。(70分)几位朋友说起这样一段探险经历:他们无意中来到一个人迹罕至的山洞。因对洞中环境不清楚,便点燃了几支蜡烛靠在石壁上。在进入洞穴后不久,发现许多色彩斑斓的大蝴蝶安静地附在洞壁上栖息,他们屏住呼吸,放轻脚步,唯恐惊扰了这些美丽的精灵。但数日后再去,却发现这些大蝴蝶已不在原地,而是远远地退到了山洞的深处。大家若有所悟,那里的环境也许更适宜吧,小小的蜡烛竟会产生这么大的影响。要求:①角度自选;②立意自定;③题目自拟;④除诗歌外,文体自选;⑤不少于800字。【名师解析及素材运用小贴士】掀开2013年江苏高考作文题的面纱,一片哗然。“探险者与蝴蝶”的新材料竟然疑点重重。为此,人们不
[Zhenti playback] read the following materials, in accordance with the requirements of writing. (70 points) A few friends talk about such an exploration experience: they inadvertently came to an inaccessible cave. Because of the unknown environment in the hole, they lit a few candles leaning on the stone wall. Shortly after entering the cave, many colorful butterflies were found to be quietly attached to the walls of the cave. They held their breath and relaxed, lest they should disturb these beautiful elves. But a few days later, they found that these big butterflies were no longer in their place, but far retreated to the depths of the cave. If everyone is enlightened, the environment there may be more suitable for it, and the little candles will have such a big impact. Requirements: ① choice of perspective; ② self-determined; ③ self-question; ④ In addition to poetry, style optional; ⑤ not less than 800 words. [Teacher analysis and material tips] opened the 2013 Jiangsu college entrance essay question veil, an uproar. “Explorer and Butterfly ” new material even doubts. For this reason, people do not