失误原因:情节虚假题目:不成曲调也是歌张佳齐人生如画,成长如歌,确是好作,亦有微瑕,虽为好曲,尚有不足。一帆风顺的人生固然精彩,但坎坷挫折的人生又何尝不是一首动听的歌?故日:“不成曲调也是歌。”雨淅淅沥沥地下着,“嘀嗒—嘀嗒”一颗颗雨珠胡乱地敲打着地面发出一连串不成曲调的声响,扰得我心神不宁。我凝视着眼前的棋盘,心中一次又一次地演算着,哪堪败局已定,我早已陷入了穷途末路之境。 Reasons for the error: the plot is false Title: not a melody is also a song Zhang Jiaqi picturesque life, growth, such as song, really good work, but also slightly flawed, although a good song, there are still inadequate. Smooth life is wonderful, but the ups and downs of life is not a pleasant song? So day: “No melody is also a song. ” Rainy lingering, "tick - tick Randomly beating the ground issued a series of unnatural sounds, disturbing me uneasy. I stared at the front of the board, my heart again and again with the calculation, which defeat has been set, I have plunged into a dead end of the situation.