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此文“思”字立骨——以“只是跃动的神思在我的指间跳跃,灵性的回归让我须发皆白”同“眼神懒懒地扫过地面,寻找可吃可穿可用的东西”对比出之。但是,第二自然段中的“注视”应改为“关心”,以强化“思”字;倒数第二自然段的“我思故我在”应该删除,以防“思”出偏差——行文忌泥实而不顾主旨。此文材料可变格用于2004年全国高考辽亍卷“平凡与自豪”作文话题,变格的途径是:强化柏拉图对拾荒者前后两次问“你是谁”不予回答的描写;详写哲学家与拾荒者在市井“并肩拾荒”的细节。
The word “thinking” is literally a bone--“Is just the pulsing thoughts leaping in my fingers, the return of spirituality makes me all white” and “looked lazily across the ground, looking for something to eat and wear.” “Contrast something.” However, the “gaze” in the second paragraph of nature should be changed to “concern” to strengthen the word “thinking”; the second paragraph of the “paraphrase” should be deleted to prevent “thinking” of deviations. Avoid physical reality regardless of subject matter. This material is used for the topic of “Ordinary and Proud” composition in the 2004 national college entrance examination Liaojuan. The way to change the status is to strengthen Plato’s description of “who you are” before and after the scavenger asks twice; Writing philosophers and scavengers in the market “shelter slag” details.