记日记是练笔的好方式,在平日里写日记的时候,我们一定切忌泛泛写来,马虎对付,那样,用写日记来锻炼写作的目的也就很难达到。这一期的两篇“博客日记”都很好,两个小作者皆选取了日常生活中的一件事,记出了情,写出了趣,道出了感受,应该提出表扬。比较二者,《吃阳春面》显得更好一些,因为小作者在记叙的过程中,加入了理性的思考。 Diary diary is a good way to practice pen, diary weekdays, we must avoid writing in general, careless dealings, so that writing diary to exercise the purpose of writing is also very difficult to achieve. The two “blog diaries” of this issue are all very good. Both of the two small writers have chosen one thing in their daily life. They have written down their feelings, wrote out their own interests, expressed their feelings and deserved praise. Comparing the two, “eat yang noodles” is better, because the little author in the narrative process, adding rational thinking.