There are many seasons in a year. I like spring best， because a year’s plan starts with spring.
　　I think spring is the best season of a year. In spring， the weather gets warmer and fields turn green. This is a busy time for the peasants. In sunny and warm weather， I fell happy and relaxed. I often ride a bike； I am fond of listening to light music because music is the salt of our life. I love spring. It is time to plant trees and flowers. Spring makes our cities greener and more beautiful.
　　Spring brings us hope and happiness. If you want to do something， please get started in spring.
　　【简评】文章线索明朗，主题突出，紧紧围绕“我最喜欢的季节”这一话题进行文章开头交待得十分清楚，打动人心，具有真情实感，起到总领全文的作用。小作者以饱满的激情，描写了最喜欢的季节——春天。对于景色的描写，语言简练而准确，读后使人触景生情。
　　文章结尾处集中表达情感，既照应开头又总结全文。足见小作者的写作功力，做到了首尾连贯，一气呵成。
　　指导教师：遇培真