这一期的“博客日记”里,有两篇日记,写得都不错,所记之事从生活中来,记后都有感想、都有思考。思路是正确的。只是《爬山虎》的小作者齐沛良说:“我今后写日记,一定要像写《爬山虎的脚》的作者一样,认真观察,因为这样才能写出好的文章。”这里边有一点小小的误区,观察日记只是日记的一种,写日记不仅仅需要观察,还需要探索、思考、梳理、不修饰,不夸大或缩小事实等等。 In this issue of “Blog Diary”, there are two diaries, which are all well written. The things they remember come from their daily life. They all have thoughts and thoughts after they are recorded. The idea is correct. Qi Pei-liang, a small author of “Tides,” said: “I write a diary in the future and must be as careful as I can write a good article,” wrote the writer, “the foot of Parthenocissus.” There is a little misunderstanding here Diary observation is only a diary, diary not only need to observe the diary, but also need to explore, think, sort out, do not modify, do not exaggerate or reduce the facts and so on.